Peer Review

I feel like I’m going to use my editors review a lot. He gave me some great feed back on some ideas that I could change to enchance my overall thesis. He liked my overall theme I was going with towards analyzing Wall-e. With my essay he wanted me to exapand a little bit on some of the claims I bring to the table for support. More connections to the real world to add more support to my argument. But overall I feel like I got the most help with my essay while reading their essay. When I say this I started seeing things I should do with my paper to support my arguments, while at the same time seeing things I shouldn’t be doing with my essay. I feel like the peer review really open my eyes in every aspect both reviewing and getting reviewed overall great experience!